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SciFiVirteleon's avatar

Really nice! I like how it turned into a beautiful vampire story at the end!

Neal Perry's avatar

A good, entertaining story that makes for a really intriguing universe. A world where vampires exist with humans. Though this storyline has been executed before, True Blood, for example, this is a much more light-hearted approach while still allowing tackling such subjects as marginalization, anxiety, etc. The drinking of sheep's blood shows a moral and/or legal decision made on the part of the protagonist, which I think would be interesting to explore further. All in all, you did a good job here. Nice work.

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